I visited the house of death,the day before I died,
I saw foot prints left by you all, gone before,
They were wet of tears, somebody poured in waste.
But the house was bright and happy filled, I found.
Death was not there, smiled- when he came, hold my hands,
Cool it was, freezing my blood, streaked and stuffed it ,
Blocking my heart, closing my nasals, taking my breath.
I felt he placing a heavy feet on me ,and dragging me down.
My eyes were coming out, dried up my throat, falling into a darkness..
I came to know my death happening, slowly, waving, shivering,
My hands fallen, legs went feathery, all went nill,but still...
I was fearless, happy and hold his hands tight and close.
I heard a cry to leave that hand, but I couldn’t, I loved it-
The comfort, the hands gave me in no time, I didn’t leave it,
The cry went whistling ,faded off, and I was not knowing the truth,
It was u cried for me, but, but i can’t escape from him, as u know .
In very small time a reached above the clouds, then I got a backward look,
Miles and miles down,saw u crying near me, calling me loudly and-
Asking a look, a kiss and telling me u will return me my golden pen.
Then I felt a guilty, I urged to come back, I heard same cry, it was yours.
I felt I’m still in his house, where was it above the clouds, don’t know-
Now light and darkness mixed me with cool and freezing breeze,
The fragrance of death was filled in that breeze, I was awake ,
Hearing u and all crying, and all sounds were passing me fast.
I then realised I never saw him near me, never I got any hands near me
I was feeling sad, why I wished, and went to that house,
But was there such a house of death- I wondered, smiling,
And I woke up, to a new dawn.. there u all were not present……..
I saw foot prints left by you all, gone before,
They were wet of tears, somebody poured in waste.
But the house was bright and happy filled, I found.
Death was not there, smiled- when he came, hold my hands,
Cool it was, freezing my blood, streaked and stuffed it ,
Blocking my heart, closing my nasals, taking my breath.
I felt he placing a heavy feet on me ,and dragging me down.
My eyes were coming out, dried up my throat, falling into a darkness..
I came to know my death happening, slowly, waving, shivering,
My hands fallen, legs went feathery, all went nill,but still...
I was fearless, happy and hold his hands tight and close.
I heard a cry to leave that hand, but I couldn’t, I loved it-
The comfort, the hands gave me in no time, I didn’t leave it,
The cry went whistling ,faded off, and I was not knowing the truth,
It was u cried for me, but, but i can’t escape from him, as u know .
In very small time a reached above the clouds, then I got a backward look,
Miles and miles down,saw u crying near me, calling me loudly and-
Asking a look, a kiss and telling me u will return me my golden pen.
Then I felt a guilty, I urged to come back, I heard same cry, it was yours.
I felt I’m still in his house, where was it above the clouds, don’t know-
Now light and darkness mixed me with cool and freezing breeze,
The fragrance of death was filled in that breeze, I was awake ,
Hearing u and all crying, and all sounds were passing me fast.
I then realised I never saw him near me, never I got any hands near me
I was feeling sad, why I wished, and went to that house,
But was there such a house of death- I wondered, smiling,
And I woke up, to a new dawn.. there u all were not present……..
Comments
it was nicely weaved in the feelings with the words. I really appreciate the choice of the meager soft words which invokes the intimate satisfaction to soul. It was really great...Keep working ,keep writing...
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